Hyksos Property Protection Act - Revision history

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Adding English language flag using the "L" template

BradsBot: clean up, typos fixed: with with → with

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clean up, typos fixed: with with → with

Tizuby at 20:23, 31 March 2018

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Tizuby at 05:10, 30 March 2018

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Tizuby at 05:06, 30 March 2018

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Tizuby at 23:50, 29 March 2018

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← Older revision		Revision as of 22:47, 1 August 2018
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	*Gazebos (1 per person)		*Gazebos (1 per person)
	*House Buildings		*House Buildings
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-Please use the discussion page [[Talk:Hyksos_Property_Protection_Act]] to leave any feedback about this draft law
+Please use the discussion page [[Talk:Hyksos Property Protection Act]] to leave any feedback about this draft law
 Note that this law is currently at the character count limit. No more can be added to it without taking words away. After speaking with the devs, the solution to this problem is to amend the law with additional restrictions after it passes. This serves as the base law to be extended over time to shore up gaps.
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-===Terminology===
+==Terminology==
 *"Construct" is anything built by a player.
 *"Exclusionary Zone" is a radius around a construct in which only a construct's owner can place further constructs.
-*"Owner" is the owning individual player (personal constructs) or any player with with the required rank to tear down the construct (guilded constructs).
+*"Owner" is the owning individual player (personal constructs) or any player with the required rank to tear down the construct (guilded constructs).
 *"Originating Construct" is the oldest placed construct with an exclusionary zone at a location.
 *"Infringing Construct" is any construct not owned by an originating owner inside an existing exclusionary zone.
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   The terminology section is here only because the text was getting cumbersome and confusing with the conflict resolution parts. It cut down the character count considerably as well.
-===Main Text===
+==Main Text==
 All player or guild owned constructs listed below shall have a 35 coordinate exclusionary zone.
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   This makes explicit that a building that has been allowed to be built in an exclusionary zone, either by being there before said zone exists, or because a player had permission to build in the zone, cannot be moved or destroyed by the player who revoked permission. It would mean that the permitted player can't place further buildings within the zone though, as that is the actual permission that exists.
-===Constructs allowed to have an exclusionary zone===
+==Constructs allowed to have an exclusionary zone==
 *Compounds w/ cornerstones
   I need some help with verbiage to clarify that the "start date" is the original buildings build date, not the day a cornerstone is placed for purposes of deciding what building has the exclusionary zone in the case of conflicts. Character limit is making this rough.
 *Gazebos (1 per person)
 *House Buildings

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 *Compounds w/ cornerstones
   I need some help with verbiage to clarify that the "start date" is the original buildings build date, not the day a cornerstone is placed for purposes of deciding what building has the exclusionary zone in the case of conflicts. Character limit is making this rough.
-*Gazebos
+*Gazebos (1 per person)
 *House Buildings

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 I've put explanations of what each part should do in pre-formatted text blocks. These will not be in the petition and exist to explain intent.
-Due to the character limit, there are some gaps and potentials for abuse. In order to close those up it was advised when I spoke to Malard that additional laws that amend this one would need to be passed to handle those situations. If this law passes I will immediately begin drafting such an amendment using feedback from the community to shore up gaps. If you identify things that aren't critical and can wait until that amendment, please add them to the discussion page.
+Due to the character limit, there are some gaps and potentials for abuse. In order to close those up it was advised when I spoke to Malard that additional laws that amend this one would need to be passed to handle those situations. If this law passes I will immediately begin drafting such an amendment using feedback from the community to shore up gaps. If you identify things that aren't critical and can wait until that amendment, please add them to the discussion page. This "base law" as is could be abused in the meantime to grief, however doing so will be very expensive, so the threat of such is mitigated.
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 Note that this law is currently at the character count limit. No more can be added to it without taking words away. After speaking with the devs, the solution to this problem is to amend the law with additional restrictions after it passes. This serves as the base law to be extended over time to shore up gaps.
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 *"Originating Construct" is the oldest placed construct with an exclusionary zone at a location.
 *"Infringing Construct" is any construct not owned by an originating owner inside an existing exclusionary zone.
 ===Main Text===
 All player or guild owned constructs listed below shall have a 35 coordinate exclusionary zone.
 All players or guilds other than the originating owner require the permission of the originating owner to build anything within this zone (potentially implemented as a permissions setting allowing no one, anyone, or a white-list of players/guilds).
 The originating construct always wins when a permitted infringing owner builds a construct that itself has an exclusionary zone of an originating construct.
 Any infringing constructs placed after passage and before implementation can be moved out of an exclusionary zone at the request of the originating owner or infringing owner one time. If no move is done within 1 week, the infringing building is considered permitted.
 Permitted constructs keep their permission forever.
 ===Constructs allowed to have an exclusionary zone===
 *Compounds w/ cornerstones
 *Gazebos
 *House Buildings

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	Please use the discussion page [[Talk:Hyksos_Property_Protection_Act]] to leave any feedback about this draft law		Please use the discussion page [[Talk:Hyksos_Property_Protection_Act]] to leave any feedback about this draft law
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		+	Note that this law is currently at the character count. No more can be added to it without taking words away. After speaking with the devs, the solution to this problem is to amend the law with additional restrictions after it passes. This serves as the base law to be extended over time to shore up gaps.

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 The originating construct always wins when a permitted infringing owner builds a construct that itself has an exclusionary zone of an originating construct.
-This law applies retroactively from passage to the time of implementation. Any infringing constructs violating an exclusionary zone can be moved out of it at the request of the originating owner or infringing owner one time. If no move is done within 1 week, the infringing building is considered permitted.
+This law applies retroactively from passage to the time of implementation. Any infringing constructs placed during this time can be moved out of it at the request of the originating owner or infringing owner one time. If no move is done within 1 week, the infringing building is considered permitted. Buildings existing prior to passage are not subject to this provision.
 Permitted constructs keep their permission forever.