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Peacefulness at 01:33, 16 January 2019

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Peacefulness at 21:59, 14 January 2019

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 ) "if the wheat has been roasted, it should also work for leading the pig."
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 --[ just for grits and shins, might want to include a link to the time page--though it's probably unlikely that anyone who is ready for pigs doesn't understand the three times, you never know what kind of shenanigans noobs might get up to ;p .]
 ) "Athrinbyan + Qusian     40-48     20-29     30-39     These four combinations cover most of the pigs being tended by players"
---It's not entirely clear exactly what 'these four'refers to
+--It's not entirely clear exactly what 'these four'refers to  (Finally figured out a clear way to format it)
 ) So just to clarify, 15 pigs WILL reproduce, more that 15 won't, right?
 ) In the happiness section, if my understanding is correct you should mention it.  My understanding is that if you pull a piggy out of the swinery, and slaughter it outside the swinery, even right IN FRONT OF ITS FRIENDS AND FAMILY, they will be unmoved.
 ) Regarding the bit of code under Pet Pigs, IMO you're best off giving a brief explanation that the code-ignorant (like myself) will understand. [Otherwise, you know us noobs and our constant noobish questions  ]
   My enormous facility with figuring stuff out allows me to surmise that this should do: "Essentially, if the pig happiness is below zero , a random number between 0 and 100 is added to it, and if the result is still below zero, the pig runs away."
 ) "Each breed of pig may discover a different type of clay.""
 --Use of 'may' here may be problematic.  I can come up with a few different things it could mean.  I would need to hear what it actually means to suggest better phasing.  For example, it could mean we're not sure if different breeds discover different types of clay, or that each breed does discover different types, but... well who cares about possibilities, what I THINK you're saying that pigs of different breeds might, can, or do discover different types of clay in the same spot?  Are all breeds capable of finding all types of clay, but a given breed will always find a given type at a given spot, which is often different from what another breed will always find at the same spot?  Or is it not always, does it change with same breed same spot?
 ) As for the rest of that paragraph, It needs kind of a tie it up summary.  Are you saying that you can build the ovens next to each other regardless, but if they are identified by the same breed, their dredging mechanisms will interfere? But the dredging mechanisms on ovens over clay discovered by different breeds will not interfere?  I could help rewording if I knew  whether or not that's what it really means.

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Peacefulness: /* Feedback from Slartibartfast, being edited. Thank you very much! */

Peacefulness at 01:33, 16 January 2019

Peacefulness: /* Feedback from Slartibartfast, being edited. Thank you very much! */ new section

Peacefulness at 21:59, 14 January 2019

Peacefulness: Created page with "suggestions welcome!"