User:Nissim/Venery - Revision history

Nissim: /* Start: The Rise of Babaotep in Bernike / L'avènement de Babaotep à Bernike */

2020-08-15T07:01:47Z

Start: The Rise of Babaotep in Bernike / L'avènement de Babaotep à Bernike

2020-08-15T05:44:45Z

Key 6: the Ankh symbol / le symbole de Ankh

2020-08-15T05:38:36Z

Key 5: the wedding's ring / l'anneau du mariage

2020-08-15T05:32:42Z

Key 4: Nephtys' bracelet/ le bracelet de Nephtys

2020-08-15T05:21:11Z

Key 2: Isis' blessing / la bénédiction de Isis

2020-08-15T05:16:44Z

Key 1: Babaotep's rattle / le hochet de Babaotep

2020-08-14T18:57:38Z

Key 2: Isis' blessing / la bénédiction de Isis

2020-08-14T18:35:56Z

Start: The Rise of Babaotep in Bernike / L'avènement de Babaotep à Bernike

2020-08-14T18:35:18Z

End

2020-08-14T18:32:12Z

Key 6: the Ankh symbol / le symbole de Ankh

← Older revision		Revision as of 07:01, 15 August 2020
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−	==Start: The Rise of Babaotep ~~in Bernike~~ / L'avènement de Babaotep ~~à Bernike~~ ==	+	==Start: The Rise of Babaotep / L'avènement de Babaotep ==
	'''Location:''' 3043, -945, venery gathering point		'''Location:''' 3043, -945, venery gathering point

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 ==Key 6: the Ankh symbol / le symbole de Ankh ==
-'''Location:''' 3541, -188, Acquaduct pump / pompe d'acqueduct
+'''Location:''' 3530, -191, Acquaduct pump / pompe d'acqueduct
 '''Preparation needed:''' to get back to the acquaduct pump once the first towers are met / suivre les tours d'acqueduct jusqu'à la pompe

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 ==Key 5: the wedding's ring / l'anneau du mariage ==
-'''Location:''' 3282, -981, altar / autel
+'''Location:''' 3282, -983, altar / autel
 '''Preparation needed:''' to locate where 2 roads end on the nearby mountain / localiser où 2 chemins se terminent sur la montagne voisine

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 ==Key 4: Nephtys' bracelet/ le bracelet de Nephtys ==
-'''Location:''' (4) 2832, -1007, acrofield / terrain d'acrobatie
+'''Location:''' (4) 2835, -1008, acrofield / terrain d'acrobatie
 '''Preparation needed:''' <e.g. build things, chat to owners of structures nearby or to be used>
-'''Attach lockbox to:''' one of the fountains at the start of the acro field
+'''Attach lockbox to:''' East fountain at the start of the acro field
 '''CLUE text:''' You found Nephtys' bracelet ! The lovers decided to marry at an altar that is at the top of the rocky mountain East from here, to get closer to the Gods. / Vous avez trouvé le bracelet de Nephtys! Les deux amoureux décidèrent de se marier à l'autel au sommet de la montagne rocheuse à l'Est, plus près des Dieux.

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 ==Key 2: Isis' blessing / la bénédiction de Isis==
-'''Location:''' (2) 2907, -1344, U Worship / Vénération
+'''Location:''' (2) 2907, -1346, North Monument of Worship, by U Worship / Vénération
 '''Preparation needed:''' to locate on the map the University south from here / localiser sur la carte l'université au Sud
-'''Attach lockbox to:''' one of the Worship Monuments close to U Worship
+'''Attach lockbox to:''' the North Worship Monuments close to U Worship
 '''CLUE text:''' You found Isis' blessing ! Soon Babaotep got the best possible education. At the end of his architecture studies, he received a beautiful compass / Bravo, vous avez trouvé la bénédiction de Isis ! Très vite, Babaotep reçut la meilleure éducation. A la fin de ses études d'architecture, il reçut un magnifique compas.

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 ==Key 1: Babaotep's rattle / le hochet de Babaotep==
-'''Location:''' 2871, -868, handprint / empreinte de main
+'''Location:''' 2838, -873, Dwarf Safsaf tree, close to the handprint / empreinte de main
 '''Preparation needed:''' locate the handprint on the map / localiser l'empreinte de main sur la carte

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 '''CLUE text:''' You found Isis' blessing ! Soon Babaotep got the best possible education. At the end of his architecture studies, he received a beautiful compass / Bravo, vous avez trouvé la bénédiction de Isis ! Très vite, Babaotep reçut la meilleure éducation. A la fin de ses études d'architecture, il reçut un magnifique compas.
-'''HINT text:''' Babaotep's rattle can be found close to a pond with a hand shape North / le hochet de Babaotep se trouve à côté d'une marre avec la forme d'une main au Nord
+'''HINT text:''' Babaotep's rattle can be found in the tree the closest to a pond with a hand shape North / le hochet de Babaotep se trouve dans l'arbre le plus proche à côté d'une marre avec la forme d'une main au Nord
 ==Key 3: Imhotep's compass / le compas de Imhotep==

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 '''OVERVIEW text:''' This venery is narrating the childhood and rise of Babaotep in emblematic areas of this region. It's a good idea to have the map open to locate the keys / Ce venery raconte l'enfance et l'adolescence de Babaotep ponctuées par certains endroits emblématiques de la région. Il est facile de reconnaître ces endroits avec la carte ouverte pendant que vous faites le venery.
-'''HINT text:''' <direct the runner to the location of the first key> The map shows the print of one of our God's hands, not far north-west from this gathering point. There you will have no difficulty finding the first key. / La carte montre l'empreinte d'une main (de l'un de nos dieux) pas loin au Nord-Ouest de ce point de départ.
+'''HINT text:''' The map shows the print of one of our God's hands, not far north-west from this gathering point. There you will have no difficulty finding the first key. / La carte montre l'empreinte d'une main (de l'un de nos dieux) pas loin au Nord-Ouest de ce point de départ.
 ==Key 1: Babaotep's rattle / le hochet de Babaotep==

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 '''Location:''' 3043, -945, venery gathering point / point de départ
-'''CLUE text:''' <confirm they found the right place, wrap up the story, and ask them to click gathering point again to rate the venery>
+'''CLUE text:''' I hope that you enjoyed playing this venery and learning about Babaotep's life. Now it's time to vote :-) / J'espère que vous avez pris du plaisir à faire ce venery sur les traces de Babaotep. Merci de voter :-)
 {{L|en}}

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 '''Attach lockbox to:''' the first tower of the acquaduct (pump)
-'''CLUE text:''' <confirm they found the right place and direct them to the next location>
+'''CLUE text:''' You found all keys, please go back to the starting point to complete this venery! / Vous avez trouvé toutes les clés! Veuillez retourner au point de départ pour compléter ce venery.
-'''HINT text:''' <direct them back to previous location if they missed it>
+'''HINT text:''' the wedding ring can be found in the common altar that is at the top of the rocky mountain South. 2 roads end close to it. / L'anneau de mariage se trouve dans l'autel au sommet de la montagne rocheuse au Sud. 2 routes se terminent devant cet autel.
 ==End==